Good times, everyone. Good times… so Assignment #1 is finished at long last (though it has been fun and challenging!) I narrowed my previous thumbnails down to 4 finalized designs. Here they are (see images below)!
Feel free to share your comments and I’ll be sure to check out everyone’s blog posts as well!
Next Step: Redesigning the weakest of our 4 designs. So, I felt that my first design (consisting of only vertical and horizontal line) was rather weak. There wasn’t enough differentiation of line thickness, no does it lead your eyes to any interesting paths. I feel rather confident in my redesign, I successfully divided the new design into two interesting visuals.
Again, please leave any comments/suggestions for me. I look forward to checking out everyone’s redesigns! Later, gators…
Hey William!
I really liked your designs, I do believe your diagonal line composition is my favorite but its close with the curved lines. I look forward to your isolation and concentration work.
Hey! I think your designs are really interesting! there is a lot of stuff going on in each of them. I like how you used your space by filling it with lines. I could say that it looks a little bit clustered but not in a bad way! The busyness in each of your designs creates wholeness and the designs are nice to look at even separate from each other.
Your designs are awesome I love each one of them! They are out of what everyone would expect. They are unique, innovative and creative. Excellent work!
- Juliana Vargas
I’m seriously obsessed with your diagonal lines image! For some reason your redesign image wont show up on my computer :/
http://blog.scad.edu/mfarme21/