Here is the visual presentation part to Thesis Review I
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Tara, couple of comments of you presentation. It seems like you have a lot of good content and information but I think your pages could be more dynamic. I like how you have the three blue bars on each page to sorta separate the flow of the information on the page but when you have a diagram or image that is full page you should take out the middle blue bar. I don’t know if this happened in just the version you posted here or in your real version but that middle blue bar shows through your full page images and becomes confusing to read. Also, your choice of font is just a little old fashioned. I know SCAD is all about image and good graphics so a simple and effective way to boost your audience interest is to use a more modern font that is clean while being fun and easy to read. You could also start to make certain key words bold or italic or even bigger so they will stand out quicker in your presentations. Hope this helps, keep up the great work.