The Jack and Jill project was a group effort. It was hard to pin down if we wanted to do realistic or abstract but in the end went with abstract.
Our comments during the critique were that
1. Thought that the lines indicated movement but could have been a different shape.
2. Wished there had been something in the back to contrast the white wall.
3. The composition was good overall.
4. Thought that the story was understandable with the shapes.