Re-design
This is my re-design. I chose to replace my design because it was not very appealing and there was too much continuous negative space. I think this design uses the space better, and it is more interesting to look at.
The design I replaced
Hey Stefan! I really like your redesign. the original was good but your new one creates almost an optical illusion and the difference in line thickness plays well with that illusion.
hey im willson, the redesign looks good but it feel like you can just fall out of it maybe if on or 2 edges touched it would create a different effect but i like how it sucks you into the middle.
you should check out my blog.
http://blog.scad.edu/wipena20/category/uncategorized/