Thesis statement evolution

So here is the “final” (or is it “finalfinal” or “finalA” or “finalB” or “final1a” ha ha…)

User’s needs, habits and expectations in how they navigate and find their way have evolved as a result of hand held devices and digital interfaces.  Wayfinding strategies derived from these devices and interfaces can be applied to traditional (analog) wayfinding systems providing complex information and cognitive value to the user. Traditional wayfinding must evolve to match the new user’s expectation or face obsolescence.

Went with a version of option 2, clarified some of the text and tried to be more assertive.

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