In my Redesign I tried to expand on the original layout. In some areas I scaled down and in other areas I spread out to make the design more organic and balanced. I think this design is better laid out than my first attempt at the design.
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I think the re-postitioning and change in scale really helped the overall look of this piece. good job.
I like your redesign man it helps the eye flow more easily over the paper by shifting the balance ever so slightly. I think it’s nicer cause it allows the eyes to follow left to right as if i were reading. Nice work!
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