Critique notes: people thought that the second and third panales really didnt look like it went with all of the rest of the and it also bothered them that in the first panel jack and jill were sideways. it was also hard for the class to figure out what are version was which was capture the flag. on the up side in general people liked our designs and the way we executed with good craftsmanship also that it was in all pretty cohesive like one person drew them all.
My contribution: I designed and drew and inked the last two panels. (besides the hill which was transferred to all the panels requiring hills.