Critique Notes: people really like my map project i guess there were only a few negative things that were said and those were only brought to light after i mentioned that the hand was suppose to kind of cover the face it was said that it didn’t really function as being over the face and also that the arm under the hand was unnecessary. but besides that i think this one went pretty well. people liked how “raw” it was so thats a plus because thats what i was going for.

Critique notes: people thought that the second and third panales really didnt look like it went with all of the rest of the and it also bothered them that in the first panel jack and jill were sideways. it was also hard for the class to figure out what are version was which was capture the flag. on the up side in general people liked our designs and the way we executed with good craftsmanship also that it was in all pretty cohesive like one person drew them all.

My contribution: I designed and drew and inked the last two panels. (besides the hill which was transferred to all the panels requiring hills.

Critique notes: First off the main problem noticed was the quality of the prints and the fact that some of my letters and numbers were if not impossible to see in black and white, very very hard. secondly my presentation was really really off sloppy mess and lazy.the one positive was that i had pretty good ones if you could see them.