Critique notes: a lot of people didnt really like my design and said it was a little boring, it was also said that i fell into the trap of a pattern in the corrnors and the focal point in the middle which i cant really argue with. People also mentioned that it wasnt a good idea to have left just the outline which i agree whith in fact i think it would have looked alot beter whiout them all together but i serverly misunderstood the directions and that was my own fault. On the up side though it was said that i had some really cool things going on that just needed to be developed better which really should have and put more thought into it.