Mirror images on photoshop
more structure to the pattern or line up
the arrangement of letters confusing
painting on blackboard nice touch
the “C” painted made a nice connection to photos
Critique notes
Balance nicely of abstract and illusional
unfolds gradually
powerful
seems dangerous
teacher very proud
very brave
Personal and universal at the same the time
went the direction the teacher wanted me to go
came along way from original idea
Wow
Working in A group is completely different then working alone. We all have different ideals and we all want to use our own but as a group we have to pick and choose and also putting different ideas and making them look one person was difficult. I would not have a problem doing a group project again, but if I had to choose………no I would not want to do it again.
Critique note
Without cards…….Can’t tell what story was
Craftsmanship…pencil and eraser marks
post negative space
simply done
more complex
repetition of shapes
Simple
Variety
A lot of similarity
first three feel like a set
third sum ups them all together
like concept of last panel
entire intrigue of what is really going , strong
stronger without words
add more elements to frame
lose clarity in fourth panel
I do not know why, but when I am not in class I do much better than when I am in class. I am not over thinking worried about everyone else . which explains a lot !! Went to museum because after my horrific motif , I needed inspiration and to stop over thinking. I found this piece Web_Orange #1 AND LOVED IT. This video is the spark to help me and my tutor.
seemed done in ten minutes-messed up and went over with white paint
pretty simple.
dont like messy sides.
offcrnter.
maybe wanted to be messy.
focal point is clear.
hard to read because of craftsmanship.
reminded of fizzy drink going everywhere.
dont see the grid or the motif.
confused about outer ring of heart shapes doesnt seem to come from same motif.
instead of rotating tile, rotated motif.
issues with directions for creating.
first reaction is craftsmanship and yet it doesnt look like the typical having trouble.
made it look messy-didnt work because of lack of craftsmanship. the messy works.
the border is interesting but it doesnt seem to match the motif.
if the center 10 x 10 were clean and sharp it would be boring.
if the center square was neat the outside could be messy.
seems like covering up mistakes. covering up? care? manage time? make mistakes.
not a great solution, but good intention. middle grey? validity in working with whats happening.
When I first chose this design, it looked much better on the tracing paper. Also it took over an hour just to get to ink black and serval more hours to refine the detail. Also I was unaware we were able to use micron pens. I only used ink and paint brushes. Every time I was close to the motifs the paint brush would cross the line. Then I would use white paint to fix, but it just kept making it worst. Which is the reason I created the boarder. But My main problem is that I over-think everything for this class. Once I tear down the wall of over thinking and second guessing myself my designs and projects will turn out much better.
The last two are isolation and the first one is concentration. I really hope I did this assignment right because I was struggling in class. I need to stop overthink lol
