Elevator Pitch – Round One
Message One
I believe intertwining graphic design and interior architecture alters the end results of a visual message in an environment. Therefore, I want the end user to understand and experience how the form and functionality of design alters the design behavior in a space. My thesis will communicate how constructing the visual form transforms the message.
Message Two
I believe intertwining graphic design and interior architecture alters the end results of a visual message in an environment. Therefore I want people to understand and experience how altering the form of 2D design changes the functionality of the design behavior in a living space. My thesis will reflect on the relationships of form, meaning and behavior.
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January 23rd, 2013 at 7:46 PM
I believe that Message Two conveys a much more “focus” look at what you are going to be taking on. Message One leaves it a bit more “general” in what you will be tackling. The part of the sentence “how constructing the visual form transforms the message” can have several tangents and subtopics to it. Meanwhile, in Message two, you specifically stated three of them. Hope this helps!
January 23rd, 2013 at 9:51 PM
Hey Roberto,
This does help! However, I came to conclusion today that I need to keep digging deeper with my idea. It’s still a little bit of a scramble mess in my notes, so I will share that shortly, I need to research more on universal principles and user experience. I need to articulate what’s in my head better – I know what I am trying to say but just need to dig deeper so you understand it too…
Thanks for your good feedback though…at least your following my train of thought.
jamie