I decided to slightly redesign my diagonal composition because I felt that some of the angles of the lines are off and not parallel to each other. Also, in my opinion, it lacks balance. In my redesign I changed the angles of some lines that all lines would be parallel to each other, also I changed position and scale of some lines that the whole composition would be more solid and balanced.
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I really like the way you redesign your diagonal project. There isn’t a lot of difference but I think we can appreciated the lines better by the different thickness and their position. great job!
What I really enjoy about your work is that you capture sort of a movement. I can feel almost vibrations from your pieces. I got that from your isolation/concentration work, and I got it even more so from these subdivision pieces. Very interesting.