Critiqe

Haveing no grid looks good, The motif is interesting, Good decision on bending the rools, parts of it look unfinished, Every one can see the concept so it is a sucessful piece, It doesnt flow smoothly, The lines should be indea ink.

My opinion

I doesnt flow as smoothly as I wanted to and I agree that it kind of looks unfinished. Over all I liked the idea but wish I could of used value.