Another fun project. I never had walked arroud paying so much attention to my surroundings.

from upper left; Bold, congestion, increase, order, playful, tension

This was a fun project becouse the assingment was so simple and free.

Critiqe

Haveing no grid looks good, The motif is interesting, Good decision on bending the rools, parts of it look unfinished, Every one can see the concept so it is a sucessful piece, It doesnt flow smoothly, The lines should be indea ink.

My opinion

I doesnt flow as smoothly as I wanted to and I agree that it kind of looks unfinished. Over all I liked the idea but wish I could of used value.

Coloring ideas for project 2

Sketches and layout ideas for project 2

Critiqe

For the one in the bottom right – it should be more cemetrical, The sizes of the lines don’t match up and it would be better if they did, Good depth, It’s like a wired dream.

For all of them – The size is bigger then the assingment, the focal point is all in the middle so it you could have some more varaety.

My opinions

Overall it was a fun project but comming up with a 100 desgines was hard. For the ones that had a lot of pieces it was hard to use the glue and still have it clean. I want to gey better with the exacto knife.

The sketches for the first project