Critique results and redesign
January 14th, 2013Posted in Uncategorized
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Welcome back!
Today we did a mass critique of the pieces, and although it wasn’t a complete and refined critique I still got a lot of useful information out of it!
The critiques for this piece were:
- Looks like fabric
- Has good craftsmanship
- The square either needs to be precisely in the middle of the piece, or very off center
- Possibly if all of the lines came into the square
- Or the lines were all smooth around the square
The critiques for this piece were:
- It looks like something underneath a microscope
- There is a presence in the center
- It looks like you are looking through the picture into something else.
I didn’t get any other critiques other than those two, but I really appreciate the critiques that I received.
I also redesigned one of the pieces. And here it is.
I really did like the idea of putting the square in another area.
I am really enjoying these designs even though they aren’t my forte.
In the meantime, have a wonderful day!
~Britty






