Craftsmanship
We were definitely not in bed together this project, Craftsmanship and I. I must have gotten pretty fed up towards the end of it all and sent Craftsmanship to go sleep on the couch. So while I was pleased with my overall design selection, I knew even before charging full speed ahead into my first critique that the “C” word was going to come back for a bite. It always did love me for my butt.
- Fuzzy edges
- PENCIL MARKS
- Smoother cuts
- Proper layout
These are all things I can, should, and will improve on. The techniques will come in time, I understand… but damn, those PENCIL MARKS just — grr! I knew better, I really did. Should have just flipped the paper over, but nooo…
See for yourselves:
WARNING: YOU ARE NOW ENTERING A JUDGING ZONE
I love your designs. They look as if they took a lot of work but it looks like you took your time and the craftsmanship looks great. Very unique, beautiful designs.
I love your first design! It reminds me of a sun for some reason. The composition is well used and the piece gives off energy. I think its really a neat design.
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I have to say that I think you were incredibly successful with this assignment! I absolutely love your diagonal composition, you’ve created a wonderful sense of depth. I also really enjoyed the composition when all of the line types come together, this was the hardest one for me to do and the solution you’ve come up here is wonderful! Great job.
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