I chose to redesign “curved lines”.
This was, originally, the first of many of my sketches that toyed around with the black more than the white in order to define shape. That’s why I chose it initially; however, I wanted to go back and tweak it… a lot. The more I stared at it — and, oh, there was much staring to be had, like I actually believed it was going to blink first. Anyway, it looked haphazard. So I went all Dr. Frankenstein on it. I kept with some of the original shapes — still playing more with the black — but toned down some of the boldness and tried to make the lines make more… sense? Do I make sense?
Drum roll, please:
This redesign is so freaking awesome.
http://blog.scad.edu/mfarme21/
Your redesign is awesome…. it is really well done, it reminds me of wind (the element), is that weird? haha wind in the night. Awesome job!